Another thing that I found that was my best work was my essay. Again, Mr.Kemp let us choose our own topic for our essays. My essay was about how cell phones are making families stronger, or making them divide. I chose to write about this topic because it is something that is big in our society. Many people have an electronic device. It's such a useful tool in our lives, and it's almost as if we need it to get around. We can use it for so many different things, like connecting with friends, use it to help us with school work, etc. We all use it so much, but we still connect with friends and family before technology became so big? Are we losing connections with our loved ones because technology has gotten in the way? No matter what we all should keep those connections with our friends and family. We shouldn't just talk to each other over the internet, nor should we block out our family because we want to focus on social media. I'm going to be totally honest, but I had a moment where I was always on my phone, hardly interacting with my family. I hardly had dinner with them because I was too busy on my phone and I would always say "Oh, I'll eat later". It is always important to keep your connections with your family close no matter what. We think that we are still close with our loved ones, but that's what think. Not what we know. It took me a while to pick a topic for my essay. I wanted to make sure it was worth the read and that I had very strong points in it. I thought that I wasn't going to do really well on my essay because I think that I'm not a very strong writer. I feel that I am not really well at persuasive writing, or writing an argument, but in this essay, I feel confident. In my opinion, I think that my essay was strong and clear, got to the point and had great points. I am very proud of my essay. I had some complications, but the end results turned out great. |
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